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 | Subject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests May 30th 2017, 00:02 | |
| Jutsu and Items for Review (Post for Blacksmithing will be done tomorrow on Tuesday) . Selling Jutsu 2 to site. The rest please evaluate. Personal Sage mode included. - Quote :
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Max of only 51.Approving for Sage Mode concept-- + Sennin Mode: Tiger Sage Mode (Personal) + > Embodying the aspects of the tigers, Asura unlocked this form of Sage Mode under their guidance. His skin tone becomes darker and tattoo-like stripes run over his arms, back, and a little of his face. The marks almost resemble tiger stripes. His hair becomes a lighter color and his natural pupils resemble tiger eyes. With nature energy coursing through his veins, his body becomes more tiger-like as well as his instincts. In this mode, he is far stronger and faster than before—along capable of utilizing the very force of nature against his enemies. + Nature Energy Cost: -100 {Activate} / -50 {Per Turn} + Effect + Drawbacks: (Nexus) Attributes x2 + Stats Halved {After Transformation} + Restrictions + Requirements: Cannot obtain "Imperfect or Perfect" Sennin + 1,500 Words + 100% Nature Control + Reward: +1 Hijutsu Senjutsu + 2 Hi-Ability [Triggers only in Sennin Mode] HI-Ability and Senjutsu HI-Ability 1: Eye of the Tiger | Tiger Instincts. Taking on tiger aspects to his body and personality, Asura’s senses have become far more acute. Not only can he attacked with better precision, but he now has enhanced reflexes to make him harder to hit in battle. Type: Passive Effect: +3 to Dice Rolls + Reduce enemy dice rolls by (X.25) . HI-Ability 2: Law of the Jungle | Tiger Prowess Tigers are renown for their fierce energy and physical power. While Sage Mode increased Asura's physical capabilities, all of his offensive skills have also been enhanced as well. Type: Passive Effect: Damage done increases by (X1.30). 1 Hijutsu Senjutsu : Senpou: Youton—Magma Tsunami! > Using a mix of Nature Transformation and Nature Energy, Asura transforms the terrain around him into molten lava completely under his control from its amount to its flow. The lava is launched at the enemy. After it attacks, despite dealing massive searing damage to enemies, the rocks solidify and the glowing embers form jutsu formulas, to seal them underneath should they survive. Nature Chakra, Stamina Cost: Hand Seals + Rank: 6 + Rank S Type: Offense, Sealing. Damage & Effect: 350 + Max Burns to all enemies. + Upon successful hit, seals enemy. Restrictions & Requirements: The seal can only be broken by an unsealing jutsu that uses Nature Chakra. 2. Shouton: Jade Star Shuriken > When ninja clash, the sharper ninja tool often wins. Using Crystal release, user creates small crystal particles at their fingertips, and grow when exposed to their chakra-- unlike its parent jutsu that requires material from the ground below. The crystal grows into a refine and sharp shape, forming four-star shuriken to be used in battle. A beautiful and deadly work of art. + Chakra & Stamina Cost: + Type: Supplementary + Hand Seal[s] + Rank: 2 + C + Effect: Create 20 "Jade Star Shuriken" tools, each one does 25 damage. + Throw action may be used in same action as this jutsu. +Parent Jutsu: Stone Molding Shuriken. 3.+ - Hei Hu Quan: Tiger Kumite Style- > > Originally translated as "Black Tiger Fist", is a classic fighting style derived from the tiger's positions and hunting. Many martial artists have studied this concept and adapted the style, consisting of its extensive footwork, acrobatic kicks, low, wide stances, and unique strikes. However, used by the tigers of Blood Vale Jungle, the practice of this martial arts is extended further beyond human practitioners can use. Those who use the Nature Energy derived from them, not only are formidably strong, but also are less taxed by the restraints of human limitation performing such Taijutsu. + Type: Offense, Supplementary + Limit:--- + Effect: Reduce Stress from Taijutsu by -2 + Stamina Cost for jutsu is reduced by 50%. + Sp. Effect: If user has a "Tiger Claw" Weapon equip, Weapon damage is added to Taijutsu. + Requirement & Restriction: Only usable while in "Tiger Sage Mode". +Created by: Asura Jiin4.+ - War God's Fists-- One thousand Blows - > > Spurred on by the need of survival and the basic of needs to earth, this Taijutsu move pushes one's physical power and speed to the surface. The user delivers a barrage of punches at the enemy. They strike so hard and move so fast, it almost appears as if the attack is being delivered by multiple arms at once. + Stamina Cost: + Type: Offensive + Rank: D + Damage: 100 + 50 extra damage (for every 100 in Dex.) + Drawback: N/A + Requirement + Restrictions: Release (1st) Chakra Gate: Muladhara - The Root/Earth Chakra First Gate +Created by: Asura Jiin5. Sage Art: Shouton --- Jade Tiger Statues Using Crystal release, Asura creates a series of Jade-appearing tiger statues on pedestals. While beautiful pieces of craftsmanship, each one contains a small bit of Nature Chakra. Over time, the statue itself begins to draw in Nature Energy on their own to be stored up later. Asura can summon them in battle to use their energy at a later time. Nature Chakra, Stamina Cost: Type: Supplementary Hand Seals + Rank: 3 + A Effect: Creates 4 Jade Tiger Statues (Items/Tools) that can be summoned via the Summoning technique. Each one collects 3% of Max NE per day (IRL time). Each one can contain a maximum of 25% NE (IRL Week’s time) . When used/Broken in combat after summoned, contained Nature Energy is transferred to the original caster. Restrictions and Requirements: Requires 1 Action to break 1 statue. This Jutsu can only be cast once per week. Created by: Asura JiinNote: Let me know of this percentage is okay. If not, Ill go back to my original formula of 80 NE per day, 560 per week max.
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Max of only 5 1. Royal Tiger Claw An improved, decorated version of the "Tiger Claw" weapon worn on one's hand. Use of this weapon is ideal for those for close combat, and skilled to slash at an opponent. Composed of three sharpened blades and a handle for strikes with the weapon. Unlike the previous one-- this one is further reinforced and decorated, fitl for warlords or emperors to show their might. Effect: ---- Blue Print: X3 Ingots + 1 Gem Slot Optional)
2. Cloth-Scroll Wristband A wrapping worn around the wrists of the Shinobi. Inside under the wrists, jutsu formulas are scribbled onto the bindings. Uses of them allows one to freely trigger summoning jutsu of ninja tools.
Placement: Wrist Effect: + ---- + Negate Summoning cost for Tool and weapon. Blue Print (X1 Ingot + 1 Gem Slot Optional)
3.Chained Hammer A mallet like weapon with a chain around it, allowing use of smashing enemies as well as using the chain to hit them from a distance.
Effect: --- Blue PRint ( X3 Ingot + 2 Gem Slot Optional)
4.Triple Blade Scythe An unorthodox scythe that utalizes three blades at its hilt. It is not ideal for killing blows but is capable of dealing some form of injury. It also has a cable at the hilt to control trajectory and other functions. Type: Martial. Damage: --- + Successful hit captures a sample of blood.
Blue Print: (3 Ingot + 2 Optional Gem slots)
5.+ - Reinforced Bow - > > A metallic frame made to secure a string and become a bow. The strength of the metals in the handle increase the power and speed of how an arrow is traveled. + Type: Marital P. Effect: --- + Effect: ---- , Damage is added to arrows used.
(Blue Print: X3 Ingots + 1 Gem slots Optional)
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 | Subject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests June 2nd 2017, 10:39 | |
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 | Subject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests June 6th 2017, 20:14 | |
| Senpou: Youton—Magma Tsunami! (For Site or Character? - Needs to be a Fuinjutsu if its going to seal. You have Ninjutsu Class correct? - Needs Costs - Needs AP Cost (If for Character.)
Shouton: Jade Star Shuriken (For Site or Character?) - Good just needs to have Costs - Needs AP Cost (If for character.)
Hei Hu Quan: Tiger Kumite Style - Good - Needs AP Cost
War God's Fists-- One thousand Blows - Good - Type should be offensive - Cost is needed. - Needs AP Cost
Sage Art: Shouton --- Jade Tiger Statues - Cannot be done, As Nature Energy does not stay collected, it vanishes or diminishes over time or at the end of battle, as it was stated it cannot be collected before a battle for any reason. - Its best to remove the % and have it use the Nature Scale. - Needs AP Cost1.
Royal Tiger Claw - Good
2. Cloth-Scroll Wristband - Good, but may wanna have it read not cloth.
3.Chained Hammer - Good, only 1 Gem Slot
4.Triple Blade Scythe - Good
5.+ - Reinforced Bow - > - Good, Lower Ingots cost to -2 Ingots |
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 | Subject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests June 6th 2017, 21:54 | |
| Changes made here. Please look in spoilers to see them. Magma Tsunami-- Yes, Asura has the sealing seed. The concept for this is simple. The power of Nature Energy laced into the earth, will naturally form a seal on its own accord. Even though Asura has some sealing knowlege, he doesn't have the aptitutde to do advance onces yet like the 4th hokage and other sealing users. However, applying nature energy to a traditional magma release seemed like a cool idea to justify a seal-- at least to contain something/someone trapped under the molten rock if should they survive. Jade Star Shuriken-- yes selling to site. Style and all other requested Hijutsu had APp added, and glad to know I can just spitball costs here from now on. As for Jade Tiger Statues--- well I'd like to get a full review of this. My goal was to make a new way of gathering nature energy that wasn't a simple 'Clone" method, which is stupid. My reasons-- 1, Sage Chakra infused Crystal would be able to collect and store nature energy due to the simple fact they are-- indeed-- statues and do not move on their own. The structure of the crystal, the chakra infused, and structure would allow this slow but steady flow and gather. (I am explaining this for Omni since we discussed it on skype earlier, Grave). Anyway i still wanna use it if we can work out an alternative way to use them to gather nature energy? Otherwise either approve the rest regarding their costs. All items are adjusted. - Quote :
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Max of only 51.Approving for Sage Mode concept-- + Sennin Mode: Tiger Sage Mode (Personal) + > Embodying the aspects of the tigers, Asura unlocked this form of Sage Mode under their guidance. His skin tone becomes darker and tattoo-like stripes run over his arms, back, and a little of his face. The marks almost resemble tiger stripes. His hair becomes a lighter color and his natural pupils resemble tiger eyes. With nature energy coursing through his veins, his body becomes more tiger-like as well as his instincts. In this mode, he is far stronger and faster than before—along capable of utilizing the very force of nature against his enemies. + Nature Energy Cost: -100 {Activate} / -50 {Per Turn} + Effect + Drawbacks: (Nexus) Attributes x2 + Stats Halved {After Transformation} + Restrictions + Requirements: Cannot obtain "Imperfect or Perfect" Sennin + 1,500 Words + 100% Nature Control + Reward: +1 Hijutsu Senjutsu + 2 Hi-Ability [Triggers only in Sennin Mode] HI-Ability and Senjutsu HI-Ability 1: Eye of the Tiger | Tiger Instincts. Taking on tiger aspects to his body and personality, Asura’s senses have become far more acute. Not only can he attacked with better precision, but he now has enhanced reflexes to make him harder to hit in battle. Type: Passive Effect: +3 to Dice Rolls + Reduce enemy dice rolls by (X.25) . HI-Ability 2: Law of the Jungle | Tiger Prowess Tigers are renown for their fierce energy and physical power. While Sage Mode increased Asura's physical capabilities, all of his offensive skills have also been enhanced as well. Type: Passive Effect: Damage done increases by (X1.30). 1 Hijutsu Senjutsu : Senpou: Youton—Magma Tsunami! > Using a mix of Nature Transformation and Nature Energy, Asura transforms the terrain around him into molten lava completely under his control from its amount to its flow. The lava is launched at the enemy. After it attacks, despite dealing massive searing damage to enemies, the rocks solidify and the glowing embers form jutsu formulas, to seal them underneath should they survive. Nature Chakra, Stamina Cost: 500 (250 chakra and 250 NE) & 325 Stamina. Hand Seals + Rank: 6 + Rank S Type: Offense, Sealing. Damage & Effect: 350 + Max Burns to all enemies. + Upon successful hit, seals enemy. Restrictions & Requirements: The seal can only be broken by an unsealing jutsu that uses Nature Chakra. +Creator: "Asura Jiin" AP Cost: 600 2. Shouton: Jade Star Shuriken > When ninja clash, the sharper ninja tool often wins. Using Crystal release, user creates small crystal particles at their fingertips, and grow when exposed to their chakra-- unlike its parent jutsu that requires material from the ground below. The crystal grows into a refine and sharp shape, forming four-star shuriken to be used in battle. A beautiful and deadly work of art. + Chakra & Stamina Cost: 250 & 88 + Type: Supplementary + Hand Seal[s] + Rank: 2 + C + Effect: Create 20 "Jade Star Shuriken" tools, each one does 25 damage. + Throw action may be used in same action as this jutsu. +Parent Jutsu: Stone Molding Shuriken. 3.+ - Hei Hu Quan: Tiger Kumite Style- > > Originally translated as "Black Tiger Fist", is a classic fighting style derived from the tiger's positions and hunting. Many martial artists have studied this concept and adapted the style, consisting of its extensive footwork, acrobatic kicks, low, wide stances, and unique strikes. However, used by the tigers of Blood Vale Jungle, the practice of this martial arts is extended further beyond human practitioners can use. Those who use the Nature Energy derived from them, not only are formidably strong, but also are less taxed by the restraints of human limitation performing such Taijutsu. + Type: Offense, Supplementary + Limit:--- + Effect: Reduce Stress from Taijutsu by -2 + Stamina Cost for jutsu is reduced by 50%. + Sp. Effect: If user has a "Tiger Claw" Weapon equip, Weapon damage is added to Taijutsu. + Requirement & Restriction: Only usable while in "Tiger Sage Mode". +Created by: Asura JiinAP Cost: 300 4.+ - War God's Fists-- One thousand Blows - > > Spurred on by the need of survival and the basic of needs to earth, this Taijutsu move pushes one's physical power and speed to the surface. The user delivers a barrage of punches at the enemy. They strike so hard and move so fast, it almost appears as if the attack is being delivered by multiple arms at once. + Stamina Cost: 160 + Type: Offensive + Rank: D + Damage: 100 + 50 extra damage (for every 100 in Dex.) + Drawback: N/A + Requirement + Restrictions: Release (1st) Chakra Gate: Muladhara - The Root/Earth Chakra +Created by: Asura JiinAP: 200 5. Sage Art: Shouton --- Jade Tiger Statues Using Crystal release, Asura creates a series of Jade-appearing tiger statues on pedestals. While beautiful pieces of craftsmanship, each one contains a small bit of Nature Chakra. Over time, the statue itself begins to draw in Nature Energy on their own to be stored up later. Asura can summon them in battle to use their energy at a later time. Nature Chakra, Stamina Cost: 450 (225 Nature Energy and chakra) & 248 Type: Supplementary Hand Seals + Rank: 3 + A Effect: Creates 4 Jade Tiger Statues (Items/Tools) that can be summoned via the Summoning technique. Each one collects 3% of Max NE per day (IRL time). Each one can contain a maximum of 25% NE (IRL Week’s time) . When used/Broken in combat after summoned, contained Nature Energy is transferred to the original caster. Restrictions and Requirements: Requires 1 Action to break 1 statue. This Jutsu can only be cast once per week. Created by: Asura JiinAP Cost: 500 Note: Let me know of this percentage is okay. If not, Ill go back to my original formula of 80 NE per day, 560 per week max.
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Max of only 5 1. Royal Tiger Claw An improved, decorated version of the "Tiger Claw" weapon worn on one's hand. Use of this weapon is ideal for those for close combat, and skilled to slash at an opponent. Composed of three sharpened blades and a handle for strikes with the weapon. Unlike the previous one-- this one is further reinforced and decorated, fitl for warlords or emperors to show their might. Effect: ---- Blue Print: X3 Ingots + 1 Gem Slot Optional)
2. Scroll Wristband A wrapping worn around the wrists of the Shinobi. Inside under the wrists, jutsu formulas are scribbled onto the bindings. Uses of them allows one to freely trigger summoning jutsu of ninja tools.
Placement: Wrist Effect: + ---- + Negate Summoning cost for Tool and weapon. Blue Print (X1 Ingot + 1 Gem Slot Optional)
3.Chained Hammer A mallet like weapon with a chain around it, allowing use of smashing enemies as well as using the chain to hit them from a distance.
Effect: --- Blue PRint ( X3 Ingot + 1 Gem Slot Optional)
4.Triple Blade Scythe An unorthodox scythe that utilizes three blades at its hilt. It is not ideal for killing blows but is capable of dealing some form of injury. It also has a cable at the hilt to control trajectory and other functions. Type: Martial. Damage: --- + Successful hit captures a sample of blood.
Blue Print: (3 Ingot + 2 Optional Gem slots)
5.+ - Reinforced Bow - > > A metallic frame made to secure a string and become a bow. The strength of the metals in the handle increase the power and speed of how an arrow is traveled. + Type: Marital P. Effect: --- + Effect: ---- , Damage is added to arrows used.
(Blue Print: X2 Ingots + 1 Gem slots Optional)
Jutsu updated.
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 | Subject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests June 7th 2017, 18:11 | |
| All's good then expect for the Jade Tiger statues one until we get further results or conformation on it. |
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 | Subject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests June 7th 2017, 22:14 | |
| ALright. all approved-- I will just come back to the Jade Statue idea later. |
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 | Subject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests June 10th 2017, 11:22 | |
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License Registration Form Another batch of jutsu and items to create and review please. No selling-- just Hi jutsu.
Also added another item I hope no one minds if I make 6? ONly cause i realized how great it could be after seeing a pic of it.
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Max of only 51.+ - Katon/Enton to Shounetsuton - > > This allows those who have awakened the power of Shounetsuton to convert Katon, even Enton jutsu into Shounetsuton. As a result, the previous jutsu are given new life and power by paying extra in chakra. Jutsu enhanced by Shounetsuton become unparalleled in power. The flames of life are drawn to the physical energy of the target, driven to burn them to ashes. + Chakra & Stamina Cost: Katon/Enton Drain x1.25 + Type: Offensive + Hand Seal(s) + Rank: +1 of Katon's & "?" + Damage + Effect: (DMG = Targets Stamina ) is added to enhanced Jutsu's damage. + Burn Status HP Drain is increased by X2.0 +SP. Effect: If user has the Tengan active, DMG = Target's MAX Stamina instead + Burn Status cannot be negated. +Parent Jutsu : " Katon to Enton " by Hayabusa Uchiha. +Created by: "Asura Jiin" 2. Yang Release Seal: Heavenly Sun Rejuvenation. > A seal normally invisible but positioned over the heart of the body in the shape of a tribal sun. It appears when triggered. The overflow of life energy that radiates from a person rejuvenates them after suffering catastrophic injury, either by an enemy or by overexertion of the own body. It also binds a person to a certain age, which gives the wielder almost infinite longevity. Chakra & Stamina Cost : 500 & 275 (to cast). Releasing the seal costs none. Hand Seals & Rank: 4 + S Seal Type: Even Effect: Restores all nexus stats , HP, chakra control and status conditions to 100%. Includes Sage Mode and Inner Gate side effects. Sp. Effect: Target user cannot age beyond their mid-20s. Restrictions & Requirement: Must have 100% Yang Release Mastery. May be cast on another person-- but will fade after one use unless user has Yang Element. Unable to use after activation for 1 month IRL. Can only be undo/broken if user has yang Release/Yin-yang release. 3. Summoning Jutsu - < Tribal Elder: Vidav-- Sage of Wisdom -- S Class. > + Summons one of the revered tiger elders. Vidav, the Wise. This summon, despite being one of the oldest and renown for his power, is an anthro tiger and the same height as an average person. He wears a long, deep blue shroud that covers his body and hood that obscures a good part of his face. When he does remove it, it reveals a more sage like attire. A blue and gold adorn tunic and pants. Almost a royal attire with a pendant around his neck. Hidden from that fact, he still has a lean and strong build despite his presumed age. He also wears wrapping bandages around his feet, that reveal more tiger like feet. He is roughly around 800 years old and was a former boss of the tribe. In one time he was respected and fear for great power, but now in a more ironic twist he is known as compassionate, wise and patient. Far more than Boss Byakko is, and is a reliable council for the tiger leader. He welcomes new comers to the jungle, including humans. He takes great interest in Asura's training and seeks to initiate him into the tribe as a true member, allowing him to be the first human to become a sage to their tribe. + Effect: 1 Summon {S} Rank with +200 of Character Base Attributes. Possess 0/3 elements: Jutsu Focus: Genjutsu and Medical Ninjutsu +Cost : 510 & 332 (25% discount on CS= 383 + 249) + Limit: 10 Turns +Restrictions and Drawbacks: Cannot summon another version of Vidav at the exact same time. - Summon Detail and Jutsu:
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+ - Medical Ninjutsu: Symbiosis- > > Similar to the puppet technique, Vidav uses chakra to connect threads of chakra to an ally. However, unlike traditional strings meant to manipulate targets, these strings add an extension that interacts with the attached parties circulatory system, nervous system and chakra network. Through this method, not only is one able to transfer charka, but able to influence their allies chakra nature from a distance. The applications for this technique are varied, including transferring and sharing chakra, removing Genjutsu from allies, but also using another's body and senses to cast Genjutsu on an enemy, making it harder to avoid or counter. + Chakra & Stamina Cost (Upkeep): 400 & 220 (200 & 110) + Type: Supplementary + Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 1 + A + Effect: Chakra and resources between Summon and Summoner is now shared. Also the two are aware of both's surroundings through partially shared senses and gain telepathy between them. + While upkeep is paid, the following abilities may be used for actions.
- Mind Gauge = 100% + Remove Genjutsu Effects
- Heals X1.30 HP + Remove 1 Status Condition.
- Transfer Genjutsu Contact type from one user to another. + Roll +2.
- Recovers X1.20% of stamina + -1 Stress
+ Restrictions and Drawbacks: Only Maximum of 2 of these options can be used per turn. Activation takes a separate action to trigger. + - Cursed Jungle Jutsu - > > Vidav lets out a loud and wide reaching roar. The target or targets designated by those in range of the roar will suddenly see a massive jungle emerge almost akin to the First Hokage's Deep Forest Emergence jutsu. The targets wander in this jungle, hearing all kinds of dangerous beasts' sounds and jumping at shadows. No matter where they go, they cannot escape the jungle. Targets slowly lose their minds the longer they are trapped in the genjutsu, wandering it for all eternity. Targets attacked while under this genjutsu can't tell where their enemy is. + Chakra & Stamina Cost: 470 & 305 + Contact + Type: Sound + Contact + Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 3 + S + Effect: Target/Targets lose -20% Mind Gauge per turn. Cannot dodge. Allies and caster cannot be targeted by enemy till Genjutsu is broken. + Restrictions and Drawbacks: Caster can end the jutsu at any time. Caster is not cloaked and can be discovered in the jungle if enemy successfully rolls critical roll to discover them. Roll=16-20 (Dice roll increases do not count). + - Tiger Eyes' Hypnotism - > > Vidav glares into an opponent's eyes and plunges his will deep into his victim's mind. Target becomes hypnotized by the caster, unable to resist his will and do his bidding. The eyes of the tiger intimidates even the most brave. + Chakra & Stamina Cost: 460 & 299 + Contact + Type: Sight /Touch + Supplementary + Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 1 + S + Effect: Hypnotizes target. Caster can control actions of opponent in place of his own for a grand total of 5 turns. Target must answer all questions truthfully. (Paralysis. Target must answer all questions truthfully.) + Restrictions and Drawbacks: + - Broken Psyche: Trick Room - > > The subject inflicted by the Genjutsu will suffer a sudden change in cognition. Their attack will hit what seems to be a mirror and their target shatters. The world suddenly transforms into a warped dimension of mirror images of enemies, and where gravity and patches of reality seem to be messed up. In truth, this genjutsu warps a person's senses and cognition to change the battlefield. + Chakra & Stamina Cost: 500 & 325 + Contact + Type: Sight /Touch/Sound + Supplementary + Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 4 + S + Effect: -60% Mind Gauge + Reverse dice rolls. (Dice roll increases still apply but only worsen the results  ) See Below for results. - Results: 1 - 5 = Critical Success [DMG x 1.15] (Awesome Hit!) - Results: 6 - 10 = Successful Hit (There you go.) - Results: 11 - 15 = Fail (Off by a little!) - Results: 16 - 20 = Nightmarish Fail (Where were you aiming?) + Restrictions and Drawbacks:
4. - Inner Balance Summoning Seal: >> A pre-programmed seal that responds to the wearer's mental state. The seal takes the shape of a black and white tiger in a yin-yang seal upon the back of the person, along with the substantial jutsu formula. The seal acts similar to a curse mark as it reacts to a certain stimulus to the person inscribed on. In the event the subject succumbs to a powerful Genjutsu and is unable to break out of it-- the seal triggers. In response, the seal on the applied person's back summons a powerful ally of the Blood Vale Tigers to aid the summoner. The contracted summon is driven to aid the person under the Genjutsu. + Chakra & Stamina Cost: (Same cost equal to Summon cost) + Seal Type: Odd + Type: Supplementary + Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 5 + ? + Effect: When inflicted by a Genjutsu of S class or higher and unable to break free, Summon "____________" free of cost. + Adds +10 to Summon's Duration. + Restrictions and Requirements: Seal expires after use. Needs to be reapplied later for other uses. Summon may only be S class or lower. + Creator: "Asura Jiin" 5. + - Divine Tiger Claws- - > Shin(sei) Tora no Tsume> A sacred jutsu bound to the weapons of the Tigers. Their claws always tore their enemies to shreads, and now too can they use them to rend through space itself. By slashing at a pocket of space, one may tear through reality and cross space through the claw-shaped slash. The tears can be used for multiple purposes from fast-travel teleportation to repel enemy assaults by cutting one portal via the claws, and the other end positioned near an enemy. One must have a clear location/idea in mind of where each tear in space occurs. + Chakra & Stamina Cost: 400 & 260 > V2 = x1.20 Costs + Type: Supplementary + Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 0 + S + Effect: Instant Travel | Evade 1 Action | Successful Retreat from Battle + V2: Reflect 1 Enemy Attack against new target | 1 Action = Damage can’t be blocked/reflected. Reflects 1 Offensive Action against new designated target. + Requirement & Restriction: Jikku Manipulation Knowledge + Must have “Tiger Claw” Weapon Equipt, forged from Shinkoku territory. +Creator: Asura Jiin
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Max of only 5 1.Cestus A pair of gauntlet-like weapons that both provide defense as well as offense. Blunted and armored front of the fist allows more damage to be dealt by Taijutsu users. Placement: Weapon + Wrists. Effect: Dmg= 30 +10 STR & +5 END Blue Print : X2 "___" Ingots + (Optional) -1 Gem
2.Bladed Cestus A more offense version of the Cestus as it now sports a blade that tretracts and shoots out from the base. Adds stabbing power to blows when used. Placement: Weapon + Wrists. Effect: Dmg= 30 + 20 STR Blue Print : X3 "___" Ingots + (Optional) -2 Gem
3. (Color ) Vest Designed more to be light weighted and of soft cloth, it expands the user's flexibility and dexterity. At Asura's personal preference, he made the color red to symbolize fire. Placement: Upper Inner-OUter body. Effect: ______ (Dex only) Blue Print: X 2 "____" Ingots + Optional -1 Gem.
4. (Color) Hakama A traditional Hakama that is worn from the waist down and covers over the legs. Traditionally made of cloth, add on's were made to both the embroidery and the sash that keeps it in place. Placement: Lower Body Effect: ______ (Dex Only) Blue Print X 2" _____ Ingots + Optional -1 Gem.
5. Tatsumaki Shuriken A unique style weapon-- a large Shuriken similar in nature to the "Kyojin Shuriken" in size and use. A big difference in this version is the points of the shuriken are curved for more cutting power. In addition, the design is meant to be thrown at an enemy, then the curve nature causes it to return back to the thrower to reuse as a weapon. Type: Weapon 1 handed. P. Effect: _____ Damage: _____ + Returns to user after thrown. Blue Print X 3"_____ Ingots + Optional -1 Gem.
6. Kunai Tuning Fork An oddly made two prong kunai. It is not ideal for combat, but is capable of dealing a blow when needed. However, its more unique feature comes from its constitution of the metal. When struck, the sound it produces is clear and reacts on a high-level pitch that is almost not audible for animals' hearing. It is proven as a great tool for those who value the use of Genjutsu. Type: Ninja Tool. Damage: _____ + Sound Base Genjutsu cannot be blocked by earplugs. Blue Print X 1____ Ingot + Optional -1 Gem = Makes 5.
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 | Subject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests June 17th 2017, 21:58 | |
| After discussion with Grave on Skype, updated Jutsu list and items. Remember, the effects of Symbiosis work by selecting only a maximum of 2 to use, and each one count as an action. Not all of them can be used at the same time. Also ideally i want that medical genjutsu removal to be more effective for combat? Got rid of Trick Room since i don't understand Genjutsu clearly. ALso since Space+Time Jutsu cannot have more than 3 abilities , making a 6th jutsu to add the ones I need. please pardon me. And correct if wrong but the idea of 3 abilities limited to Time-space seems stupid. ALso please confirm if the Jutsu Must state instant travel for its abilities , or can I just assume and not bother for its effects. Please state it here for the rules. - Quote :
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Max of only 51.+ - Katon/Enton to Shounetsuton - > > This allows those who have awakened the power of Shounetsuton to convert Katon, even Enton jutsu into Shounetsuton. As a result, the previous jutsu are given new life and power by paying extra in chakra. Jutsu enhanced by Shounetsuton become unparalleled in power. The flames of life are drawn to the physical energy of the target, driven to burn them to ashes. + Chakra & Stamina Cost: Katon/Enton Drain x1.25 + Type: Offensive + Hand Seal(s) + Rank: +1 of Katon's & "?" + Damage + Effect: (DMG = Targets Stamina ) is added to enhanced Jutsu's damage. + Burn Status HP Drain is increased by X2.0 +SP. Effect: If user has the Tengan active, DMG = Target's MAX Stamina instead + Burn Status cannot be negated. +Parent Jutsu : " Katon to Enton " by Hayabusa Uchiha. +Created by: "Asura Jiin" AP Cost: 700 2.Yang Release Seal: Heavenly Sun Rejuvenation. > A seal normally invisible but positioned over the heart of the body in the shape of a tribal sun. It appears when triggered. The overflow of life energy that radiates from Yang Release chakra rejuvenates the person after suffering catastrophic injury, either by an enemy or by overexertion of the own body. However, one who has Yang Release chakra within them, can never be killed by conventional methods, which grants the bearer of the mark eternal youth and immortality. Chakra & Stamina Cost : 500 & 275 (to cast). Releasing the seal costs none. Hand Seals & Rank: 4 + S Seal Type: Even Effect: Restores all nexus stats , HP, chakra control and status conditions to 100%. Includes Sage Mode and Inner Gate side effects. Sp. Effect: Possessing Yang Release = Target user cannot age beyond their mid-20s and are Immortal. Restrictions & Requirement: Must have 100% Yang Release Mastery. May be cast on another person-- but will fade after one use unless user has Yang Element. Unable to use after activation for 1 month IRL. Can only be undo/broken if user has yang Release/Yin-yang release. Ap Cost: 600 3.Summoning Jutsu - < Tribal Elder: Vidav-- Sage of Wisdom -- S Class. > (Picture and description written in previous posts) + Effect: 1 Summon {S} Rank with +200 of Character Base Attributes. Possess 1/3 elements: Suiton. Jutsu Focus: Genjutsu and Medical Ninjutsu +Cost : 510 & 332 (25% discount on CS= 383 + 249) + Limit: 10 Turns +Restrictions and Drawbacks: Cannot summon another version of Vidav at the exact same time. - Summon's Jutsu:
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+ - Medical Ninjutsu: Symbiosis- > > Similar to the puppet technique, Vidav uses chakra to connect threads of chakra to an ally. However, unlike traditional strings meant to manipulate targets, these strings add an extension that interacts with the attached parties circulatory system, nervous system and chakra network. Through this method, not only is one able to transfer charka, but able to influence their allies chakra nature from a distance. The applications for this technique are varied, including transferring and sharing chakra, removing Genjutsu from allies, but also using another's body and senses to cast Genjutsu on an enemy, making it harder to avoid or counter. + Chakra & Stamina Cost (Upkeep): 400 & 220 (200 & 110) + Type: Supplementary + Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 1 + A + Effect: Chakra and resources between Summon and Summoner is now shared. Also the two are aware of both's surroundings through partially shared senses and gain telepathy between them. + While upkeep is paid, the following abilities may be used once for actions.
- Mind Gauge = 100% + Negate Genjutsu Effects.
- Heals X1.30 HP + Remove 1 Status Condition.
- Transfer Genjutsu Contact type from one user to another. + Roll +2.
- Recovers X1.20% of stamina + -1 Stress
+ Restrictions and Drawbacks: Only Maximum of 2 of these options can be used per turn. Activation takes a separate action to trigger. + - Cursed Jungle Jutsu - > > Vidav lets out a loud and wide reaching roar. The target or targets designated by those in range of the roar will suddenly see a massive jungle emerge almost akin to the First Hokage's Deep Forest Emergence jutsu. The targets wander in this jungle, hearing all kinds of dangerous beasts' sounds and jumping at shadows. No matter where they go, they cannot escape the jungle. Targets slowly lose their minds the longer they are trapped in the genjutsu, wandering it for all eternity. Targets attacked while under this genjutsu can't tell where their enemy is. + Chakra & Stamina Cost: 470 & 305 + Contact + Type: Sound/Contact + Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 3 + S + Effect: Target/Targets lose -15% Mind Gauge per turn. Allies and caster cannot be targeted by enemy till Genjutsu is broken. + Restrictions and Drawbacks: Caster can end the jutsu at any time. Caster is not fully cloaked and can be discovered in the jungle if enemy successfully rolls critical roll to discover them. Roll=16-20 (Dice roll increases do not count). + - Tiger Eyes' Hypnotism - > > Vidav glares into an opponent's eyes and plunges his will deep into his victim's mind. Target becomes hypnotized by the caster, unable to resist his will and do his bidding. The eyes of the tiger intimidates even the most brave. + Chakra & Stamina Cost: 460 & 299 + Contact + Type: Sight /Touch + Supplementary + Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 1 + S + Effect: Hypnotizes target. Caster can control actions of opponent in place of his own for a grand total of 5 turns. Target must answer all questions truthfully. (Paralysis. Target must answer all questions truthfully.) + Restrictions and Drawbacks: + - Suiton: Mirror World Phantasm - > > Using Suiton, Vidav creates a large mirror which reflects the image of the caster that looks into it. In response, creates a mirror clone of the caster. This mystic mirror copies the opponent down to the last detail, as well as the jutsu they control. This jutsu forces an opponent to attack themselves, which also results in damage to the enemy's mind. Also this jutsu may be used for training purposes, + Chakra & Stamina Cost: 500 & 325 + Contact + Type: Sight + Supplementary + Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 1 + S + Effect: Creates a full identical clone of opponent. Opponent Actions = Blocked. Clone will counter each attack original uses with its own jutsu. Each time a Jutsu is countered and dispelled-- opponent's mind Gauge is reduced -20% each attack. +Special Effect: Can be used for training purposes. Nexus Training Rolls Increase by X1.50. Only works for trainee once per week. + Limit: 4.
4. - Inner Balance Summoning Seal: > > A pre-programmed seal that responds to the wearer's mental state. The seal takes the shape of a black and white tiger in a yin-yang seal upon the back of the person, along with the substantial jutsu formula. The seal acts similar to a curse mark as it reacts to a certain stimulus to the person inscribed on. In the event the subject succumbs to a powerful Genjutsu and is unable to break out of it-- the seal triggers. In response, the seal on the applied person's back summons a powerful ally of the Blood Vale Tigers to aid the summoner. The contracted summon is driven to aid the person under the Genjutsu. + Chakra & Stamina Cost: (Same cost equal to Summon cost) + Seal Type: Odd + Type: Supplementary + Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 5 + ? + Effect: When inflicted by a Genjutsu of S class or higher and unable to break free, Summon "____________" free of cost. + Restrictions and Requirements: Seal expires after use. Needs to be reapplied later for other uses. Summon may only be S class or lower. + Creator: "Asura Jiin" AP Cost: 700 5.+ - Sacred Tiger Claws- - > Sei Tora no Tsume > A sacred jutsu bound to the weapons of the Tigers. Their claws always tore their enemies to shreds, and now too can they use them to rend through space itself. By slashing at a pocket of space, one may tear through reality and cross space through the claw-shaped slash. The tears can be used for multiple purposes from fast-travel teleportation to evading enemy attacks by cutting a portal via the claws. One must have a clear location/idea in mind of where each tear in space occurs. + Chakra & Stamina Cost: 400 & 260 + Type: Defense, Supplementary + Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 0 + S + Effect: Instant Travel (May travel with 1 extra person through portal/contact) | User evade All Enemy Actions | Successful Retreat from Battle 6. + - Divine Tiger Claws- - > Shin Tora no Tsume . > A sacred jutsu bound to the weapons of the Tigers. Their claws always tore their enemies to shreds, and now too can they use them to rend through space itself. By slashing at a pocket of space, one may tear through reality and cross space through the claw-shaped slash. Unlike its predecessor, "Sei Tora No Tsume", this version is steered more for advance combat to take advantage in the tears in space. One is able to open portals to get behind enemy lines and attack by surprise, or open emerging portals to redirect enemy attacks through them. One must have a clear location/idea in mind of where each tear in space occurs. + Chakra & Stamina Cost: 450 & 293 + Type: Offence, Defense + Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 0 + S + Effect: Reflect 1 Enemy Attack against new target | 1 Action = Can’t be blocked/reflected. + Requirement & Restriction: Jikku Manipulation Knowledge + Must have “Tiger Claw” Weapon Equipt, forged from Shinkoku territory. + Parent Jutsu: Sei Tora no Tsume +Creator: Asura Jiin AP Cost: 600
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Max of only 5 1.Cestus A pair of gauntlet-like weapons that both provide defense as well as offense. Blunted and armored front of the fist allows more damage to be dealt by Taijutsu users. Placement: Weapon + Wrists. Effect: Dmg= 30 +10 STR & +5 END Blue Print : X2 "___" Ingots + (Optional) -1 Gem
2.Bladed Cestus A more offense version of the Cestus as it now sports a blade that tretracts and shoots out from the base. Adds stabbing power to blows when used. Placement: Weapon + Wrists. Effect: Dmg= 30 + 20 STR Blue Print : X3 "___" Ingots + (Optional) -2 Gem
3. (Color ) Vest Designed more to be light weighted and of soft cloth, it expands the user's flexibility and dexterity. At Asura's personal preference, he made the color red to symbolize fire. Placement: Upper Inner-OUter body. Effect: ______ (Dex only) Blue Print: X 2 "____" Ingots + Optional -1 Gem.
4. (Color) Hakama A traditional Hakama that is worn from the waist down and covers over the legs. Traditionally made of cloth, add on's were made to both the embroidery and the sash that keeps it in place. Placement: Lower Body Effect: ______ (Dex Only) Blue Print X 2" _____ Ingots + Optional -1 Gem.
5. Tatsumaki Shuriken A unique style weapon-- a large Shuriken similar in nature to the "Kyojin Shuriken" in size and use. A big difference in this version is the points of the shuriken are curved for more cutting power. In addition, the design is meant to be thrown at an enemy, then the curve nature causes it to return back to the thrower to reuse as a weapon. Type: Weapon 1 handed. P. Effect: _____ Damage: _____ + Returns to user after thrown. Blue Print X 3"_____ Ingots + Optional -1 Gem.
6. Kunai Tuning Fork An oddly made two prong kunai. It is not ideal for combat, but is capable of dealing a blow when needed. However, its more unique feature comes from its constitution of the metal. When struck, the sound it produces is clear and reacts on a high-level pitch that is almost not audible for animals' hearing. It is proven as a great tool for those who value the use of Genjutsu. Type: Ninja Tool. Damage: _____ + Sound Base Genjutsu cannot be blocked by earplugs. Blue Print X 1____ Ingot + Optional -1 Gem = Makes 5.
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 | Subject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests June 23rd 2017, 19:41 | |
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Max of only 51.+ - Katon/Enton to Shounetsuton - >  > This allows those who have awakened the power of Shounetsuton to convert Katon, even Enton jutsu into Shounetsuton. As a result, the previous jutsu are given new life and power by paying extra in chakra. Jutsu enhanced by Shounetsuton become unparalleled in power. The flames of life are drawn to the physical energy of the target, driven to burn them to ashes. + Chakra & Stamina Cost: Katon/Enton Drain x1.25 + Type: Offensive + Hand Seal(s) + Rank: +1 of Katon's & "?" + Damage + Effect: (DMG = Targets Stamina ) is added to enhanced Jutsu's damage. + Burn Status HP Drain is increased by X2.0 > Used the Drain to give an increase by x1.25+SP. Effect: If user has the Tengan active, DMG = Target's MAX Stamina instead + Burn Status cannot be negated. +Parent Jutsu : " Katon to Enton " by Hayabusa Uchiha. +Created by: "Asura Jiin" AP Cost: 700 2.Yang Release Seal: Heavenly Sun Rejuvenation.  > A seal normally invisible but positioned over the heart of the body in the shape of a tribal sun. It appears when triggered. The overflow of life energy that radiates from Yang Release chakra rejuvenates the person after suffering catastrophic injury, either by an enemy or by overexertion of the own body. However, one who has Yang Release chakra within them, can never be killed by conventional methods, which grants the bearer of the mark eternal youth and immortality. Chakra & Stamina Cost : 500 & 275 (to cast). Releasing the seal costs none. Hand Seals & Rank: 4 + S Seal Type: Even Effect: Restores all nexus stats , HP, chakra control and status conditions to 100%. Includes Sage Mode and Inner Gate side effects. No, because that would cause the forms to be broken and the only time the side effects of those were even avoid was during the movie Bonds for Inner Gates and Six Paths wearing off during the battle with Sasuke and Naruto but either or he was still running out of chakra Sp. Effect: Possessing Yang Release = Target user cannot age beyond their mid-20s and are Immortal. Restrictions & Requirement: Must have 100% Yang Release Mastery. May be cast on another person-- but will fade after one use unless user has Yang Element. Unable to use after activation for 1 month IRL. Can only be undo/broken if user has yang Release/Yin-yang release. Ap Cost: 600 3.Summoning Jutsu - < Tribal Elder: Vidav-- Sage of Wisdom -- S Class. > (Picture and description written in previous posts) + Effect: 1 Summon {S} Rank with +200 of Character Base Attributes. Possess 1/3 elements: Suiton. Jutsu Focus: Genjutsu and Medical Ninjutsu +Cost : 510 & 332 (25% discount on CS= 383 + 249) + Limit: 10 Turns +Restrictions and Drawbacks: Cannot summon another version of Vidav at the exact same time. - Summon's Jutsu:
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+ - Medical Ninjutsu: Symbiosis-  > Similar to the puppet technique, Vidav uses chakra to connect threads of chakra to an ally. However, unlike traditional strings meant to manipulate targets, these strings add an extension that interacts with the attached parties circulatory system, nervous system and chakra network. Through this method, not only is one able to transfer charka, but able to influence their allies chakra nature from a distance. The applications for this technique are varied, including transferring and sharing chakra, removing Genjutsu from allies, but also using another's body and senses to cast Genjutsu on an enemy, making it harder to avoid or counter. + Chakra & Stamina Cost (Upkeep): 400 & 220 (200 & 110) [color=red])220 & 121 + Type: Supplementary + Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 1 + A A rank should have 3 Effects I again counted 5 even including below of switching.+ Effect: Chakra and resources between Summon and Summoner is now shared. Also the two are aware of both's surroundings through partially shared senses and gain telepathy between them. + While upkeep is paid, the following abilities may be used once for actions.
- Mind Gauge = 100% + Negate Genjutsu Effects. > Negate up to S Rank, restoring Mind Gauge
- Heals X1.30 HP + Remove 1 Status Condition. > Trade HP or 1 Status Condition to other.
- Transfer Genjutsu Contact type from one user to another. + Roll +2. > Transfer Genjutsu to other, no roll increase, reason being why and how does that even matter.
- Recovers X1.20% of stamina + -1 Stress > Trade Stamina w/o Stress
+ Restrictions and Drawbacks: Only Maximum of 2 of these options can be used per turn. Activation takes a separate action to trigger. Reason: The total amount of effects you have are 5, other reasons are Bolded to be seen and colored red with the repairs and questions. + - Cursed Jungle Jutsu –  > Vidav lets out a loud and wide reaching roar. The target or targets designated by those in range of the roar will suddenly see a massive jungle emerge almost akin to the First Hokage's Deep Forest Emergence jutsu. The targets wander in this jungle, hearing all kinds of dangerous beasts' sounds and jumping at shadows. No matter where they go, they cannot escape the jungle. Targets slowly lose their minds the longer they are trapped in the genjutsu, wandering it for all eternity. Targets attacked while under this genjutsu can't tell where their enemy is. + Chakra & Stamina Cost: 470 & 305 + Contact + Type: Sound/Contact + Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 3 + S + Effect: Target/Targets lose -15% Mind Gauge per turn. Allies and caster cannot be targeted by enemy till Genjutsu is broken. + Restrictions and Drawbacks: Caster can end the jutsu at any time. Caster is not fully cloaked and can be discovered in the jungle if enemy successfully rolls critical roll to discover them. Roll=16-20 (Dice roll increases do not count). + - Tiger Eyes' Hypnotism - >  > Vidav glares into an opponent's eyes and plunges his will deep into his victim's mind. Target becomes hypnotized by the caster, unable to resist his will and do his bidding. The eyes of the tiger intimidates even the most brave. + Chakra & Stamina Cost: 460 & 299 253+ Contact + Type: Sight /Touch + Supplementary + Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 1 + S + Effect: Hypnotizes target. Caster can control actions of opponent in place of his own for a grand total of 5 turns. Target must answer all questions truthfully. (Paralysis. Target must answer all questions truthfully.) How does it make you know they are telling the truth?+ Restrictions and Drawbacks: + - Suiton: Mirror World Phantasm - >  > Using Suiton, Vidav creates a large mirror which reflects the image of the caster that looks into it. In response, creates a mirror clone of the caster. This mystic mirror copies the opponent down to the last detail, as well as the jutsu they control. This jutsu forces an opponent to attack themselves, which also results in damage to the enemy's mind. Also this jutsu may be used for training purposes, + Chakra & Stamina Cost: 500 & 325 + Contact + Type: Sight + Supplementary + Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 1 + S + Effect: Creates a full identical clone of opponent. Opponent Actions = Blocked. Clone will counter each attack original uses with its own jutsu. Each time a Jutsu is countered and dispelled-- opponent's mind Gauge is reduced -20% each attack. +Special Effect: Can be used for training purposes. Nexus Training Rolls Increase by X1.50. Only works for trainee once per week. + Limit: 4.
4. - Inner Balance Summoning Seal:  > A pre-programmed seal that responds to the wearer's mental state. The seal takes the shape of a black and white tiger in a yin-yang seal upon the back of the person, along with the substantial jutsu formula. The seal acts similar to a curse mark as it reacts to a certain stimulus to the person inscribed on. In the event the subject succumbs to a powerful Genjutsu and is unable to break out of it-- the seal triggers. In response, the seal on the applied person's back summons a powerful ally of the Blood Vale Tigers to aid the summoner. The contracted summon is driven to aid the person under the Genjutsu. + Chakra & Stamina Cost: (Same cost equal to Summon cost) + Seal Type: Odd + Type: Supplementary + Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 5 + ? + Effect: When inflicted by a Genjutsu of S class or higher and unable to break free, Summon "____________" free of cost. + Restrictions and Requirements: Seal expires after use. Needs to be reapplied later for other uses. Summon may only be S class or lower. + Creator: "Asura Jiin" AP Cost: 700 5.+ - Sacred Tiger Claws- - > Sei Tora no Tsume  > A sacred jutsu bound to the weapons of the Tigers. Their claws always tore their enemies to shreds, and now too can they use them to rend through space itself. By slashing at a pocket of space, one may tear through reality and cross space through the claw-shaped slash. The tears can be used for multiple purposes from fast-travel teleportation to evading enemy attacks by cutting a portal via the claws. One must have a clear location/idea in mind of where each tear in space occurs. + Chakra & Stamina Cost: 400 & 260 + Type: Defense, Supplementary + Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 0 + S + Effect: Instant Travel (May travel with 1 extra person through portal/contact) | User evade All Enemy Actions | Successful Retreat from Battle 6. + - Divine Tiger Claws- - > Shin Tora no Tsume .  > A sacred jutsu bound to the weapons of the Tigers. Their claws always tore their enemies to shreds, and now too can they use them to rend through space itself. By slashing at a pocket of space, one may tear through reality and cross space through the claw-shaped slash. Unlike its predecessor, "Sei Tora No Tsume", this version is steered more for advance combat to take advantage in the tears in space. One is able to open portals to get behind enemy lines and attack by surprise, or open emerging portals to redirect enemy attacks through them. One must have a clear location/idea in mind of where each tear in space occurs. + Chakra & Stamina Cost: 450 & 293 + Type: Offence, Defense + Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 0 + S + Effect: Reflect 1 Enemy Attack against new target | 1 Action = Can’t be blocked/reflected. + Requirement & Restriction: Jikku Manipulation Knowledge + Must have “Tiger Claw” Weapon Equipt, forged from Shinkoku territory. + Parent Jutsu: Sei Tora no Tsume +Creator: Asura Jiin AP Cost: 600
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All 51.Cestus A pair of gauntlet-like weapons that both provide defense as well as offense. Blunted and armored front of the fist allows more damage to be dealt by Taijutsu users. Placement: Weapon + Wrists. Effect: Dmg= 30 +10 STR & +5 ENDBlue Print : X2 "___" Ingots + (Optional) -1 Gem 2.Bladed Cestus A more offense version of the Cestus as it now sports a blade that tretracts and shoots out from the base. Adds stabbing power to blows when used. Placement: Weapon + Wrists. Effect: Dmg= 30 + 20 STRBlue Print : X3 "___" Ingots + (Optional) -2 Gem 3. (Color ) Vest Designed more to be light weighted and of soft cloth, it expands the user's flexibility and dexterity. At Asura's personal preference, he made the color red to symbolize fire. Placement: Upper Inner-Outer body. Effect: ______ (Dex only) Blue Print: X 2 "____" Ingots + Optional -1 Gem. 4. (Color) Hakama A traditional Hakama that is worn from the waist down and covers over the legs. Traditionally made of cloth, add on's were made to both the embroidery and the sash that keeps it in place. Placement: Lower Body Effect: ______ (Dex Only) Blue Print X 2" _____ Ingots + Optional -1 Gem. 5. Tatsumaki Shuriken A unique style weapon-- a large Shuriken similar in nature to the "Kyojin Shuriken" in size and use. A big difference in this version is the points of the shuriken are curved for more cutting power. In addition, the design is meant to be thrown at an enemy, then the curve nature causes it to return back to the thrower to reuse as a weapon. Type: Weapon 1 handed. P. Effect: _____ Damage: _____ + Returns to user after thrown. Blue Print X 3"_____ Ingots + Optional -1 Gem. 6. Kunai Tuning Fork An oddly made two prong kunai. It is not ideal for combat, but is capable of dealing a blow when needed. However, its more unique feature comes from its constitution of the metal. When struck, the sound it produces is clear and reacts on a high-level pitch that is almost not audible for animals' hearing. It is proven as a great tool for those who value the use of Genjutsu. Type: Ninja Tool. Damage: _____ + Sound Base Genjutsu cannot be blocked by earplugs. Blue Print X 1____ Ingot + Optional -1 Gem = Makes 5. 3
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 | Subject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests June 25th 2017, 20:25 | |
| For the sake of space and time , gonna post up only the unapproved jutsu here. 1.+ - Katon/Enton to Shounetsuton - > > This allows those who have awakened the power of Shounetsuton to convert Katon, even Enton jutsu into Shounetsuton. As a result, the previous jutsu are given new life and power by paying extra in chakra. Jutsu enhanced by Shounetsuton become unparalleled in power. The flames of life are drawn to the physical energy of the target, driven to burn them to ashes. + Chakra & Stamina Cost: Katon/Enton Drain x1.25 + Type: Offensive + Hand Seal(s) + Rank: +1 of Katon's & "?" + Damage + Effect: (DMG = Targets Stamina ) is added to enhanced Jutsu's damage. + Burn Status HP Drain is increased by X1.50 +SP. Effect: If user has the Tengan active, DMG = Target's MAX Stamina instead + Burn Status cannot be negated. +Parent Jutsu : " Katon to Enton " by Hayabusa Uchiha. +Created by: "Asura Jiin" AP Cost: 700 2.Yang Release Seal: Heavenly Sun Rejuvenation. > A seal normally invisible but positioned over the heart of the body in the shape of a tribal sun. It appears when triggered. The overflow of life energy that radiates from Yang Release chakra rejuvenates the person after suffering catastrophic injury, either by an enemy or by overexertion of the own body. However, one who has Yang Release chakra within them, can never be killed by conventional methods, which grants the bearer of the mark eternal youth and immortality. Chakra & Stamina Cost : 500 & 275 (to cast). Releasing the seal costs none. Hand Seals & Rank: 4 + S Seal Type: Even Effect: Restores all nexus stats , HP, chakra control and status conditions to 100%. Includes Sage Mode and Inner Gate 'near death state'. No, because that would cause the forms to be broken and the only time the side effects of those were even avoid was during the movie Bonds for Inner Gates and Six Paths wearing off during the battle with Sasuke and Naruto but either or he was still running out of chakra Sp. Passive Effect: Possessing Yang Release = Target user cannot age beyond their mid-20s and are Immortal. Restrictions & Requirement: Must have 100% Yang Release Mastery. May be cast on another person-- but will fade after one use unless user has Yang Element. Unable to use after activation for 1 month IRL. Can only be undo/broken if user has yang Release/Yin-yang release. Ap Cost: 600 Jutsu for Vidav---- Vidav Jutsu wrote:
+ - Tiger Eyes' Hypnotism - > > Vidav glares into an opponent's eyes and plunges his will deep into his victim's mind. Target becomes hypnotized by the caster, unable to resist his will and do his bidding. The eyes of the tiger intimidates even the most brave. Even as the victim is hypnotized, Vidav is deeply connected to the mental state of the victim, able to read his mind effectively to determine the truth. This jutsu may also be used to interrupt the Genjutsu of another enemy, saving an ally. + Chakra & Stamina Cost: 460 & 253 + Contact + Type: Sight /Touch + Supplementary + Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 1 + S + Effect: Hypnotizes target = Caster can control actions of opponent in place of his own for a grand total of 5 turns. + Target must answer all questions truthfully. (Paralysis. Target must answer all questions truthfully-- that they are conscious of.) | Negate effect of 1 S class Genjutsu on an ally. + Restrictions and Drawbacks:
++ - Suiton: Mirror World Phantasm - > > Using Suiton, Vidav creates a large mirror which reflects the image of the caster that looks into it. In response, creates a mirror clone of the caster. This mystic mirror copies the opponent down to the last detail, as well as the jutsu they control. This jutsu forces an opponent to attack themselves, which also results in damage to the enemy's mind. + Chakra & Stamina Cost: 500 & 325 + Contact + Type: Sight + Supplementary + Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 1 + S + Effect: Creates a full identical clone of opponent. Opponent Actions = Auto Blocked. Clone will counter each attack original uses with its own jutsu. Each time a Jutsu is countered and dispelled-- opponent's mind Gauge is reduced -15% each attack. + Limit: 4. + Restrictions and Drawbacks: Block can only work on Melee, Ninjutsu, Taijutsu, Bukotsujutsu.
+ - Medical Ninjutsu: Symbiosis- > Similar to the puppet technique, Vidav uses chakra threads to connect to an ally. However, unlike traditional strings meant to manipulate targets, these strings add an extension that interacts with the attached parties circulatory system, nervous system and chakra network. Through this method, not only is one able to transfer charka, but able to influence their allies chakra nature from a distance. The applications for this technique are varied, including transferring and sharing chakra, removing Genjutsu from allies, but also using another's body and senses to cast Genjutsu on an enemy, making it harder to avoid or counter. + Chakra & Stamina Cost (Upkeep): 500 & 325 (325 & 211) + Type: Supplementary + Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 1 + S rank + Effect: Chakra and resources between Summon and Summoner is now shared. + Also the two are aware of both's surroundings through partially shared senses and gain telepathy between them. + While upkeep is paid, the following abilities may be used once for actions.
Mind Gauge = 100% + Negate up to S Rank Genjutsu Heals X1.30 HP + Remove 1 Status Condition. > Trade HP or 1 Status Condition to other. Transfer Genjutsu Contact type from one user to another. Recovers X1.20% of stamina + -1 Stress > Trade Stamina w/o Stress
+ Restrictions and Drawbacks: Only Maximum of 2 of the above options can be used per turn. Options takes a separate action to trigger. + While Symbiosis is active, the caster cannot cast any other jutsu during its duration. + Reactions used by Vidav causes the jutsu to break, and must be recast if to be used again.
(Redoing this jutsu now that I understand the effects per rank) 5.+ - Sacred Tiger Claws- - > Shinsei Tora no Tsume > A sacred jutsu bound to the weapons of the Tigers. Their claws always tore their enemies to shreds, and now too can they use them to rend through space itself. By slashing at a pocket of space, one may tear through reality and cross space through the claw-shaped slash. The tears can be used for multiple purposes from fast-travel teleportation to evading enemy attacks by cutting a portal via the claws. With careful placement and proper control, one can use the portals to bypass enemy defenses or redirect an enemy's attack. One must have a clear location/idea in mind of where each tear in space occurs. + Chakra & Stamina Cost: 400 & 260 > Lvl 2.= X 1.15 cost. + Type: Defense, Supplementary + Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 0 + ? + Effect: Instant Travel (May travel with 1 extra person through portal/contact) | User evade All Enemy Actions + Lvl 2: Reflect 1 Enemy Attack against new target | 1 Action = Can’t be blocked/reflected. + Requirement & Restriction: Jikku Manipulation Knowledge + Must have “Tiger Claw” Weapon Equipt, forged from Shinkoku territory. +Creator: Asura Jiin AP Cost: 700 Item: 6. Kunai Tuning Fork An oddly made two prong kunai. It is not ideal for combat, but is capable of dealing a blow when needed. However, its more unique feature comes from its constitution of the metal. When struck, the sound it produces is clear and reacts on a high-level pitch that is almost not audible for animals' hearing. It is proven as a great tool for those who value the use of Genjutsu. Type: Ninja Tool. Damage: _____ + Sound Base Genjutsu cannot be blocked by earplugs. Blue Print X 1____ Ingot + Optional -1 Gem = Makes 3 |
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| Rewriting Yang Seal-- changes made after talk on Discord.
2.Yang Release Seal: Heavenly Sun Rejuvenation. > A seal normally invisible but positioned over the heart of the body in the shape of a tribal sun. It appears when triggered. The overflow of life energy that radiates from Yang Release chakra rejuvenates the person after suffering catastrophic injury, either by an enemy or by overexertion of the own body. However, one who has Yang Release chakra within them, can never age beyond a certain point. They gain eternal youth and infinite longevity. Chakra & Stamina Cost : 500 & 275 (to cast). Releasing the seal costs none. Hand Seals & Rank: 4 + S Seal Type: Even Effect: Restores all nexus stats , HP, Chakra Control and status conditions to 100%.(Excludes Near Death State)
Sp. Passive Effect: Possess Yang Release = Target user cannot age beyond their mid-20s and have infinite longevity. + Adds +3 to Mantra Inner Gates limits. Restrictions & Requirement: May be cast on another person-- but will fade after one use unless user has Yang Release Element. Unable to use after activation for 1 month IRL. Can only be undo/broken if user has yang Release/Yin-yang release. Ap Cost: 600 |
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|  Katon/Enton Jutsu, Yang Seal Heaven Sun Rejuvenation, Scared Tiger Claws |
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| The following is me rewriting Vidav summoning jutsu that still needs approving. Now that i understand the limit of S class, i hope this works. Symbiosis i changed to only use one of the selective effects seperated from actions, but now using 1, not 2 out of them. Also chakra upkeep cost is paid by both-- each paying half of the cost to maintain the connection. ANd symbiosis now justified by the caster cannot use other jutsu, so defense of the caster requires aid of the summoner. If that isn't Symbiotic, then what the fuck is? + - Tiger Eyes' Hypnotism - > > Vidav glares into an opponent's eyes and plunges his will deep into his victim's mind. Target becomes hypnotized by the caster, unable to resist his will and do his bidding. The eyes of the tiger intimidates even the most brave. Even as the victim is hypnotized, Vidav is deeply connected to the mental state of the victim, able to read his mind effectively to determine the truth. This jutsu may also be used to interrupt the Genjutsu of another enemy, saving an ally. + Chakra & Stamina Cost: 460 & 253 + Contact + Type: Sight /Touch + Supplementary + Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 1 + S + Effect: Hypnotizes target = Caster can control actions of opponent in place of his own for a grand total of 5 turns. + Target must answer all questions truthfully. (Paralysis. Target must answer all questions truthfully-- that they are conscious of.) | Negate effect of 1 S class Genjutsu on an ally. + Restrictions and Drawbacks: + - Suiton: Mirror World Phantasm - > > Using Suiton, Vidav creates a large mirror which reflects the image of the target that looks into it. In response, creates a mirror clone of the caster. This mystic mirror copies the opponent down to the last detail, as well as the jutsu they control. This jutsu forces an opponent to attack themselves, which also results in damage to the enemy's mind. + Chakra & Stamina Cost: 500 & 325 + Contact + Type: Sight/Touch + Defense/ Supplementary + Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 1 + S + Effect: Creates a full identical clone of opponent and Opponent Actions = Auto Blocked by mimicking enemy's jutsu/attack exactly. + Each time a Jutsu is blocked/countered, opponent's mind Gauge is reduced -15% each attack. + Limit: 4. + Restrictions and Drawbacks: Block can only work on Melee, Ninjutsu, Taijutsu, Bukijutsu. + - Medical Ninjutsu: Symbiosis > Similar to the puppet technique, Vidav uses chakra threads to connect to an ally. However, unlike traditional strings meant to manipulate targets, these strings add an extension that interacts with the attached parties circulatory system, nervous system and chakra network. Through this method, not only is one able to transfer charka, but able to influence their allies chakra nature from a distance. The applications for this technique are varied, including healing wounds, removing Genjutsu from allies, but also using another's body and senses to cast Genjutsu on an enemy, making it harder to avoid or counter. However, this jutsu requires great concentration and the caster is unable to use other jutsu to maintain this connection-- leaving protection of the caster up to the summoner who summoned Vidav. + Chakra & Stamina Cost (Upkeep): 500 & 325 (325 & 211) Note: Summon and summoner pays half for upkeep between them to maintain jutsu. + Type: Supplementary + Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 1 + S rank + Effect: Vidav and the attached target is aware of both's surroundings through partially shared senses and gain telepathy between them. + While upkeep is paid, the following abilities may be used once for actions: - Mind Gauge = 100% + Negate up to S Rank Genjutsu
- Heals X1.30 HP + Remove 1 Status Condition.
- Transfer Genjutsu Contact type from one user to another.
- Regenerates X1.30 Stamina to target + removes -3 stress from target.
+ Restrictions and Drawbacks: While Symbiosis is active, the caster cannot cast any other jutsu during its duration. To recast, they must pay the original cost all over again. + Only Maximum of 1 of the above options can be used per turn separated from actions. |
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| Lower Tiger Hypnosis to 3 Turns
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| + - Tiger Eyes' Hypnotism - > > Vidav glares into an opponent's eyes and plunges his will deep into his victim's mind. Target becomes hypnotized by the caster, unable to resist his will and do his bidding. The eyes of the tiger intimidates even the most brave. Even as the victim is hypnotized, Vidav is deeply connected to the mental state of the victim, able to read his mind effectively to determine the truth. This jutsu may also be used to interrupt the Genjutsu of another enemy, saving an ally. + Chakra & Stamina Cost: 460 & 253 + Contact + Type: Sight /Touch + Supplementary + Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 1 + S + Effect: Hypnotizes target = Caster can control actions of opponent in place of his own for a grand total of 3 turns. + Target must answer all questions truthfully. (Paralysis. Target must answer all questions truthfully-- that they are conscious of.) | Negate effect of 1 S class Genjutsu on an ally. + Restrictions and Drawbacks:
Fixed and done-- ty Omni!
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| - Quote :
License Registration Form Due to a misunderstanding that -- i cannot make ninjutsu that truly do anything to enemy chakra network-- so I need to fix some jutsu including its parent ones that work on it. Along with other jutsu that were poorly constructed after new rules.
Also know-- the Taiyou Chakra Modes in here, I am trying to follow the new rule but give the new jutsu a power to be added to the first. If possible great-- if not, lets try to slowly work it out. Thank you.
- Fixing Jutsu:
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1. + - Prowling the Wilds (From summon jutsu) - > > The tiger mount moves at a fast speed on land. It travels at a fast speed across the terrain. Ideal for covering distance fast and travel. Riding this creature to get from one place to another allows reliable and swift travel to one's destination. + Chakra & Stamina Cost: 310 & 140 + Type: Supplementary + Hand Seal(s) + Rank: B + Effect: +2 Combat/Evasion Roll & Travel Time -2 Hour [Land Only] + May carry one extra person.
+ Changed Effect: Travel Time reduced by half. [Land Only] + May carry one extra person.
2. Yang Release Seal: Heavenly Sun Rejuvenation. > A seal normally invisible but positioned over the heart of the body in the shape of a tribal sun when triggered. The overflow of life energy that radiates from Yang Release chakra rejuvenates the person after suffering catastrophic injury, either by an enemy or by overexertion of the own body. However, one who has Yang Release chakra within them, can never age beyond a certain point. They gain eternal youth and infinite longevity. Effect: Restores all nexus stats , HP, Chakra Control and status conditions to 100%.(Excludes Near Death State) Sp. Passive Effect: Possess Yang Release = Target user cannot age beyond their mid-20s and have infinite longevity. + Adds +3 to Mantra Inner Gates limits. Restrictions & Requirement: Unable to use after activation for 1 month IRL.
+ Change to main effect: Restores all nexus stats , HP, Chakra , stamina and status conditions to 100%.(Excludes Near Death State)
3. + - (6th) Chakra Gate: Ajai - The Third Eye Chakra > > Located in the center of the forehead, this governs the third eye-- one's sense of intuition and insight through matters that they cannot see. By unlocking the Third Eye Chakra-- one can see past the illusions of the world and obtain true clarity. They become far more focused and able to react quicker than before. + Effect: Breaks free/Immune to Genjutsu of S class and below. Cost of Jutsu become reduced by X0.35 & Suffers -25% mind gauge and Chakra Control Reduced by 25% till end of battle. > After Gate ends. + Stress Level: 2 + Limit: 2
Change to Side effect: Suffers -25% mind gauge and loses -20% chakra till end of battle.
4. Asura Chakra Arms – Ironic to his name, Asura Jiin is chakra is shockingly close to the chakra of the ancient deity known as Asura, the god of wrath. As such, Asura takes on that god's traits and abilities. As part of the Jiin clan, these abilities can further manifest in combination with other jutsu. From the back of the caster, chakra takes physical form, forming four large arms that move to the wielder's will. Personal Clan Technique So it does not get added to Jiin Clan unless stated otherwise but Clan creator and Jutsu Creator. < Chakra & Stamina Cost Activation: 80 & 40 (Upkeep: 40 & 20) < Type: Supplementary + Offense < Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 0 + CLAN < Effect: Melee Dmg x1.20 & Action Costs are Halved (Excludes Transformations) < Requirement + Restrictions: Chakra Control: 50% or higher + 350 Chakra
Change Complete: Yoton: Asura Chakra Arms – Manifests the dormant power that resides in Asura's soul and awakened by Yang Release. As such, Asura takes on that god's traits and abilities. From the back of the caster, chakra takes physical form, forming four large, fiery arms that move to the wielder's will. The arms are used in both combat situations and allow the weaving of extra signs. < Chakra & Stamina Cost : 120 & 60 (Upkeep: 60 & 30) < Type: Supplementary + Offense < Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 0 + C < Effect: Melee/Taijutsu Dmg x1.20 & Gives 1 extra Action & Reaction slot. < Requirement + Restrictions: Chakra Control: 50% or higher + 350 Chakra + 600 Max Soul Gauge
- Jutsu Creation:
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Max of only 5 1.+ - Bukijutsu : Solar Flare Shuriken - > - With dexterous form and skilled aim, the user throws a series of shuriken upon a target. While the sheer number alone is considerable—the real goal the thrower uses is to catch the sunlight for each shuriken. The result creates a bright flash from all the shuriken that blinds the target and leaves them vulnerable. " The wise shinobi uses the environment to their advantage." + Stamina Cost: 150 + (Shuriken used) + Type: Offensive + Rank: C + Effect: Damage = Shuriken Damage X 1.25 + Blinding Status on enemy = Dice rolls are “Zero” for 3 turns. + Drawbacks: Minimum shuriken : 10 + Blind effect negated if no light source is around. AP: 300
2.+ Shounetsuton: Taiyou Chakra Mode (Phoenix form) - > > The power of Inferno Release is released in its ultimate form as the caster becomes one with the white blaze of their own life and soul, greatly increasing their power. After the blaze engulfs them, they emerge in a white-burning aura pattern along their body along with a jacket’s cloak. The flames of Inferno Release create a white chakra shroud with a tribal sun pattern on the back with the spiraling flame-like designs that etch over the cloak—signifying the mythical origin of the inferno release. When paired with its sibling chakra mode at the same time, the two become incredibly more powerful. A 'Diety Ring" appears behind him from the unified fusion of the two modes. > + Chakra & Stamina Cost: 500 & 325 (Upkeep: 325 & 211) + Type: Supplementary + Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 1 (Dragon) + S + Effects: Flight= +4 Dice Rolls + Katon-affiliated jutsu costs reduced by 50% + Special effects: When one has Tengan active at 100% mastery, Shounetsuton jutsu cannot be negated by any external force except its caster. Exception only to (Six Sage) Yin-yang release or sealing methods. + Parent Jutsu: Katon: Extreme Dragon Armor + Drawback: AP: 600
3.+ Shounetsuton: Taiyou Chakra Mode (Tiger form) - > > The power of Inferno Release is released in its ultimate form as the caster becomes one with the white blaze of their own life and soul, greatly increasing their power. After the blaze engulfs them, they emerge in a white-burning aura pattern that covers the user's body. Flame like patterns run over the clothing of the caster. Unlike its sibling jutsu-- this one uses the Inferno Release to not only enhance the body, but converts the damage the user does to restore his physical energy. When paired with its sibling chakra mode at the same time, the two become incredibly more powerful. A 'Diety Ring" appears behind him from the unified fusion of the two modes. > + Chakra & Stamina Cost: 500 & 325 (Upkeep: 325 & 211) + Type: Supplementary + Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 1 (Tiger) + S + Effects: Nexus Buff X 1.50 + Damage done by Melee/Taijutsu and Shounetsuton jutsu restores user's Stamina by 25% of damage. + Special effects: If "Taiyou Chakra Mode (Phoenix form)"is active or cast after while this jutsu is active-- jutsu abilities are added to other form, and upkeep becomes that of the first jutsu. + Parent Jutsu: Katon: Extreme Dragon Armor + Drawback: When Both Chakra Modes are active-- in addition to the upkeep costs, user must pay 25 HP per upkeep turn. AP: 600
4.< - Shounetsuton : Yoake Mandara - Dawn Mandala > > Combining the power of Inferno Release with change in chakra-form, the caster molds the white flames to form a wide-area pattern along the ground. Upon activation, the flames erupt outward and take on solid shape around the caster. The shape and power creates a protective space that blocks incoming attacks from all sides, using an enemy’s own physical energy against them. From the ground, it appears to look like a strange white lotus flower—from the air, it forms a perfect geometric pattern that is a holy symbol of a mythic empire. > + Chakra & Stamina Cost: 425 & 230 + Type: Defense + Supplementary + Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 4 + A + Effects: Blocks All DMG = Attacker’s MAX Stamina. + If Attacker’s Damage is lower than their Max Stamina, difference is reflected at them as damage OR difference added to defending user’s stamina. + Drawback: + AP: 500
5.+ - Shouton: Jade Soul Prism - > > The caster creates a solid barrier of super-dense crystal fused together with chakra that surrounds himself or an ally. Forming a solid crystal-- its laced with chakra to prevent penetration from enemy forces. An impregnable defense. While inside the crystal, however, the crystal has an unique property that draws in and magnifies Nature Energy-- similar to how a prism focuses and refracts light. + Chakra & Stamina Cost: 400 & 220 + Type: Defense + Supplementary + Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 3 + A + Effect: Target protected is untargetable inside crystal. Blocking = Caster's END (X2.0) and can't be destroyed unless taking +3000 DMG + Immune to Piercing status/Auto destroy barrier jutsu. + Sp. Effect: If target inside crystal absorbs N.E., instead of 80 NE per absorption, it becomes 20% Max NE. +Restrictions & Requirements: Cannot be destroyed till damage exceeds blocking power (Remains active till broken). AP: 500
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Max of only 5 1.Katana A traditional one-handed sword. The edge is sharp and designed meant for easy drawing and sheathing. Most common for samurai—however, there are plenty of shinobi who wield katanas for fighting as well. The handle is separated by a collar meant to keep the handle separate from the blade. Type: Martial. P. Effect: Damage:
Blue Print: (3 Ingot + 1 Optional Gem slots)
2.Nodachi A massively long, katana that requires both hands to wield properly. An unorthodox scythe that utilizes three blades at its hilt. It is not ideal for killing blows but is capable of dealing some form of injury. It also has a cable at the hilt to control trajectory and other functions. Type: Martial. P. Effect: Damage:
Blue Print: (5 Ingot + 1 Optional Gem slots)
3.Custom “_______” Village Headband > A cloth headband with a metal plank sewn into it. A common piece of equipment that represents a shinobi from a village. It comes in different colors. This one is suited to come with quality than more common headbands from other villages. Placement: Head P. Effect: Blue Print: (1 Ingot + 1 Optional Gem slots)
4.+ Shuriken Recipe + x Creates a basic shuriken, but with added ingots—it can be styled into a more waved or curved shape, even with more points for extra damage. + Material Cost: +X "____" Ingot (Max: 2) + Damage: "X" per Shuriken. + Amount: -1 Ingot = x10 Items
5.(Custom) Outfit > A full body attire constructed to include both the top and bottom of the body. The combine method allows the whole attire to be made for the purpose of the wearer—from full body armor to stealthy suit made to evade detection. Placement: Fills Upper and Lower Body. P. Effect: _____+ (1.15 p.effect increase) Blue Print: (6 Ingot + 1 Gem Optional)
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 | Subject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests July 17th 2017, 16:59 | |
| >_> Really...I should just let it be I told you I was in a lot of pain and I'd post up as soon as I could what needed to be worked.
4.< - Shounetsuton : Yoake Mandara - Dawn Mandala > > Combining the power of Inferno Release with change in chakra-form, the caster molds the white flames to form a wide-area pattern along the ground. Upon activation, the flames erupt outward and take on solid shape around the caster. The shape and power creates a protective space that blocks incoming attacks from all sides, using an enemy’s own physical energy against them. From the ground, it appears to look like a strange white lotus flower—from the air, it forms a perfect geometric pattern that is a holy symbol of a mythic empire. > + Chakra & Stamina Cost: 425 & 230 + Type: Defense + Supplementary + Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 4 + A + Effects: Blocks All DMG = Attacker’s MAX Stamina. + If Attacker’s Damage is lower than their Max Stamina, difference is reflected at them as damage OR difference added to defending user’s stamina. + Drawback: + AP: 500
1. wtf?! If it blocks all Damage to my MAX stamina, then it be fine, BUT if my attack damage is lower than my stamina it be pointless, cause then it bounces back my END would cover the difference. But at the same time if my damage is being blocked by again "MY" stamina then how are you taking the difference and adding it to you if you bounced it back at me?!?!
5.+ - Shouton: Jade Soul Prism - > > The caster creates a solid barrier of super-dense crystal fused together with chakra that surrounds himself or an ally. Forming a solid crystal-- its laced with chakra to prevent penetration from enemy forces. An impregnable defense. While inside the crystal, however, the crystal has an unique property that draws in and magnifies Nature Energy-- similar to how a prism focuses and refracts light. + Chakra & Stamina Cost: 400 & 220 + Type: Defense + Supplementary + Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 3 + A + Effect: Target protected is untargetable inside crystal. Blocking = Caster's END (X2.0) and can't be destroyed unless taking +3000 DMG + Immune to Piercing status/Auto destroy barrier jutsu. + Sp. Effect: If target inside crystal absorbs N.E., instead of 80 NE per absorption, it becomes 20% Max NE. +Restrictions & Requirements: Cannot be destroyed till damage exceeds blocking power (Remains active till broken). AP: 500
1. Blocking can equal Caster's END x2 which is fine, however the damage it can block is also how strong the barrier would be so +3000 DMG would not be needed. Also it would not be able to stop piercing damage or auto destroy things because one if one is able to pierce through the barrier which again is still END they could. Like Chidori cutting through a door, BUT I do not see a problem with it, because again the barrier can be destroyed.
2.+ Sp. Effect: If target inside crystal absorbs N.E., instead of 80 NE per absorption, it becomes 20% Max NE. Change that....to while inside, NE Absorption Per turn is 25% Max NE. |
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 | Subject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests July 17th 2017, 18:24 | |
| OKay got rid of jutsu damage reflection.
< - Shounetsuton : Yoake Mandara - Dawn Mandala > > Combining the power of Inferno Release with change in chakra-form, the caster molds the white flames to form a wide-area pattern along the ground. Upon activation, the flames erupt outward and take on solid shape around the caster. The shape and power creates a protective space that blocks incoming attacks from all sides, using an enemy’s own physical energy against them. From the ground, it appears to look like a strange white lotus flower—from the air, it forms a perfect geometric pattern that is a holy symbol of a mythic empire. > + Chakra & Stamina Cost: 425 & 230 + Type: Defense + Supplementary + Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 4 + A + Effects: Blocks All DMG = Attacker’s MAX Stamina. + If Attacker’s Damage is lower than their Max Stamina, difference is added to defending user’s stamina. + Drawback: + AP: 500
5.+ - Shouton: Jade Soul Prism - > > The caster creates a solid barrier of super-dense crystal fused together with chakra that surrounds himself or an ally. Forming a solid crystal-- its laced with chakra to prevent penetration from enemy forces. An impregnable defense. While inside the crystal, however, the crystal has an unique property that draws in and magnifies Nature Energy-- similar to how a prism focuses and refracts light. + Chakra & Stamina Cost: 400 & 220 + Type: Defense + Supplementary + Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 3 + A + Effect: Target protected is untargetable inside crystal (Crystal must be broken first to attack enemy). Blocking = Caster's END (X2.0) + Piercing status = Breaks Barrier only (separate action) . + Sp. Effect: If target inside crystal absorbs N.E., instead of 80 NE per absorption, it becomes 25% Max NE. +Restrictions & Requirements: Cannot be destroyed till damage exceeds blocking power (Remains active till broken). AP: 500
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| Very well designed techniques, I shall allow them. |
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 | Subject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests July 22nd 2017, 17:59 | |
| Sellling Jutsu number 4 to site. Rest are Hijutsu. Also made items in below section. Number 3 is a bit extreme and willing to make it consume all slots if not allowed but let me know if its possible or not. - Quote :
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Max of only 5 1. + - Yoton: Hikari Kage Bunshin No Jutsu - Shining Shadow Clone Jutsu - > > Using the power of Yang Release, fully realized how it reflects the physical life force of a person, Asura had adapted the same elemental power into the Shadow Clone jutsu. As a result, his clones become so developed, it is impossible to tell them apart from the original. Even a doujutsu can't distinguish the real from the fake. The clones possess the same physical traits and strengths of the original. However, the caster cannot create as many clones as to the traditional shadow clone technique. + Chakra & Stamina Cost: "X" Chakra / [# Clones] & Chakra Cost x.45 + Type: Supplementary + Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 1 + A + Effect: Clones = 100% Base (Nexus Attributes) + Chakra X 2= HP + ["X" Chakra] Split evenly among clones + -1 Action = -1 to 10 Clones to Counter Action. Max: 20 Clones Creator: Asura Jiin AP: 500
2.+ - Sacred Spring - Ripple Punch - > > A series of punches delivered by one who is proficient in both body and mind. By awakening the second gate of Svadhishthana , one's focus becomes as fluent and adaptive as water. By performing a series of punches in key points in the body, one can not only able to damage, but cripple an opponent's movement and strength. + Stamina Cost: 200 + Type: Offensive + Rank: C + Damage + Effect: 120 + Enemy (Nexus stat of choice) reduced by X.20 (This is stack-able) + Drawback: - - None - - + Requirements: Must have Second True Mantra gate, Svadhishthana active. + Knowledge of Medical Ninjutsu for pressure points in body. +Created by: Asura Jiin AP: 300
3.< - Shounetsuton : Shin Amateratsu - True Goddess of the Sun > > After studying the powers of Amateratsu of the Uchiha, Asura had adapted the same legendary jutsu into his own power of Inferno Release. Using the flames that could even consume Amateratsu, he has evolved it into the true brilliance that the name defines. The flames of Shounetsuton is the true fires of creation, that puts the Uchiha’s use of the name to shame. It emerges the same flash of flame on target’s sight but burns with a stronger purity. It also is said, when confronted with its ‘adversary’ jutsu, it grows even stronger in retaliation. > + Chakra & Stamina Cost: 500 & 350 + Type: Offense + Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 0 + S + Effects: Damage = Target’s Max Stamina + -50 HP per turn. +Sp. Effect: If used to counter “Amateratsu”, an “Amateratsu” parent jutsu or Blaze Release jutsu, Damage is increased by X1.50 and does direct damage. (Dice roll reflected on enemy's roll for counter action.) +Requirements and Restrictions: Tengan active to use. +Created by: Asura Jiin +AP: 600
4. + - Rocket Uppercut - > > A great forces backs the fist of the fighter as he pushes all his energy into a drive forward. Once at the right angle, he drives his whole body up to deliver a powerful upper-cut that strikes the opponenet's jaw. The blow is so fast and powerful, it is known to launch people clear into the air. + Stamina Cost: 200 + Type: Offensive + Rank: C + Damage + Effect: 180 + Airborne status + Drawback: +1 Stress
5 . + - Yoton: Yoake Rasengan - Dawn Spiraling Sphere - > > A version of the Rasengan transformed by the life-defining properties of Yang Release. The sphere bright light becomes even brighter and almost pure white in appearance. The physically manifested chakra of the famous jutsu is adapted to manifest the physical energy of the caster. The jutsu compresses so much energy, if released, it can be transformed into a massive beam of chakra that can decimate an opponent from far range--viewable from afar similar to a sunrise. + Chakra & Stamina Cost: 460 & 252 + Type: Offensive + Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 0 + A + Damage: Damage = (User's Stamina + HP) + Damage dealt against enemy's original End (negate status boost). +Conditions and Restrictions: To Flow Chakra raise in End does not get negated. +Created by: Asura Jiin AP: 600
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Max of only 5 1.+ Tanto + x A short blade, carried by many shinobi. Originally designed as a stabbing tool but can be used in a cutting fashion as well. Often used for more dexterous situations. + Material Cost: +X "____" Ingot + Damage & P.Effect: x + Amount: -2 Ingot + 1 Optional Gem slot= x1 Item
2.+ (Custom Armor) Recipe + x A breastplate of armor that can be used to protect the wearer. Can be inscribed with a clan or village symbol to affiliate with a side or alliance. + Body Placement: Upper Body (outer) + Material Cost: + 3 Ingot + 1 Gem slot. + P.Effect: x
3. + (Custom) Sage Outfit + x An outfit combined with fundamental qualities but + Body Placement: Fills Upper and Lower Body Slot + Material Cost: + 6 Ingot + 1 Gem slot. + P.Effect: Result/2 + NE absorption gives additional +10% of Max NE per absorption. + Sage Jutsu damage increases by 15%
4. Staff Recipe X A staff constructed of different material. It can be a basic fighting stick to one that priests carry around with the rings. + Weapon : 2 hands. + Material Cost: + 4 Ingot + 1 Gem slot Optional. + P.Effect & Damage:
5. Warlord Helmet: X A heavily armored piece of headgear that staff constructed of different material. It can be a basic fighting stick to one that priests carry around with the rings. + Body PLacement : Head + Material Cost: + 2 Ingot + 1 Gem slot Optional. + P.Effect :
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 | Subject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests July 29th 2017, 23:36 | |
| 1. + - Yoton: Hikari Kage Bunshin No Jutsu - Shining Shadow Clone Jutsu - > Shadow Clones to not have 100% of a characters Base Attributes that would have to be lowered to be 25%, as well the Clones HP = their Chakra no matter what cause if they take damage they would vanish so they would not matter having a HP bar. > Using the power of Yang Release, fully realized how it reflects the physical life force of a person, Asura had adapted the same elemental power into the Shadow Clone jutsu. As a result, his clones become so developed, it is impossible to tell them apart from the original. Even a doujutsu can't distinguish the real from the fake. The clones possess the same physical traits and strengths of the original. However, the caster cannot create as many clones as to the traditional shadow clone technique. + Chakra & Stamina Cost: "X" Chakra / [# Clones] & Chakra Cost x.45 + Type: Supplementary + Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 1 + A + Effect: Clones = 100% Base (Nexus Attributes) + Chakra X 2= HP + ["X" Chakra] Split evenly among clones + -1 Action = -1 to 10 Clones to Counter Action. Max: 20 Clones Creator: Asura Jiin AP: 500
2.+ - Sacred Spring - Ripple Punch - > > A series of punches delivered by one who is proficient in both body and mind. By awakening the second gate of Svadhishthana , one's focus becomes as fluent and adaptive as water. By performing a series of punches in key points in the body, one can not only able to damage, but cripple an opponent's movement and strength. + Stamina Cost: 200 + Type: Offensive + Rank: C + Damage + Effect: 120 + Enemy (Nexus stat of choice) reduced by X.20 (This is stack-able) + Drawback: - - None - - + Requirements: Must have Second True Mantra gate, Svadhishthana active. + Knowledge of Medical Ninjutsu for pressure points in body. +Created by: Asura Jiin AP: 300
3.< - Shounetsuton : Shin Amateratsu - True Goddess of the Sun > > After studying the powers of Amateratsu of the Uchiha, Asura had adapted the same legendary jutsu into his own power of Inferno Release. Using the flames that could even consume Amateratsu, he has evolved it into the true brilliance that the name defines. The flames of Shounetsuton is the true fires of creation, that puts the Uchiha’s use of the name to shame. It emerges the same flash of flame on target’s sight but burns with a stronger purity. It also is said, when confronted with its ‘adversary’ jutsu, it grows even stronger in retaliation. > + Chakra & Stamina Cost: 500 & 350 + Type: Offense + Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 0 + S + Effects: Damage = Target’s Max Stamina + -50 HP per turn. < Be advice wise its not a bad idea but since you are performing the attack why not have its damage equal to your stamina? +Sp. Effect: If used to counter “Amateratsu”, an “Amateratsu” parent jutsu or Blaze Release jutsu, Damage is increased by X1.50 and does direct damage. (Dice roll reflected on enemy's roll for counter action.) +Requirements and Restrictions: Tengan active to use. +Created by: Asura Jiin +AP: 600
4. + - Rocket Uppercut - > <- This could honestly be a D Rank or even lower to save up on cost of Stamina. > A great forces backs the fist of the fighter as he pushes all his energy into a drive forward. Once at the right angle, he drives his whole body up to deliver a powerful upper-cut that strikes the opponenet's jaw. The blow is so fast and powerful, it is known to launch people clear into the air. + Stamina Cost: 200 + Type: Offensive + Rank: C + Damage + Effect: 180 + Airborne status + Drawback: +1 Stress
5 . + - Yoton: Yoake Rasengan - Dawn Spiraling Sphere - > > A version of the Rasengan transformed by the life-defining properties of Yang Release. The sphere bright light becomes even brighter and almost pure white in appearance. The physically manifested chakra of the famous jutsu is adapted to manifest the physical energy of the caster. The jutsu compresses so much energy, if released, it can be transformed into a massive beam of chakra that can decimate an opponent from far range--viewable from afar similar to a sunrise. + Chakra & Stamina Cost: 460 & 252 + Type: Offensive + Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 0 + A + Damage: Damage = (User's Stamina + HP) + Damage dealt against enemy's original End (negate status boost). +Conditions and Restrictions: To Flow Chakra raise in End does not get negated. +Created by: Asura Jiin AP: 600 |
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 | Subject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests July 31st 2017, 10:59 | |
| Thank you for coming back to this-- A few questions.
Reason I did the Yang release clones for 100% nexus stats, because I thought being about the physical side of things, I thought clones with the full physical attributes of the caster would be doable. You are sure this wont work? If not, ill scrap the idea ><
As for Shin Amateratsu-- well my understanding is that Inferno Release for damage is solely reflected upon enemy's physical energy right? ALl the other inferno release on site do damage by enemy's physical energy? Why would you want me to make it my own instead? I could do it, but when facing a stronger enemy than myself, that would be more better? Could you explain your reasoning before I change it?
I assume the rests are okay that you did not comment on. But let me know if any changes. Only thing i need to confirm is the clone idea and the Shin Amateratsu.
The other Jutsu:
2.+ - Sacred Spring - Ripple Punch - > > A series of punches delivered by one who is proficient in both body and mind. By awakening the second gate of Svadhishthana , one's focus becomes as fluent and adaptive as water. By performing a series of punches in key points in the body, one can not only able to damage, but cripple an opponent's movement and strength. + Stamina Cost: 200 + Type: Offensive + Rank: C + Damage + Effect: 120 + Enemy (Nexus stat of choice) reduced by X.20 (This is stack-able) + Drawback: - - None - - + Requirements: Must have Second True Mantra gate, Svadhishthana active. + Knowledge of Medical Ninjutsu for pressure points in body. +Created by: Asura Jiin AP: 300
3.< - Shounetsuton : Shin Amateratsu - True Goddess of the Sun > > After studying the powers of Amateratsu of the Uchiha, Asura had adapted the same legendary jutsu into his own power of Inferno Release. Using the flames that could even consume Amateratsu, he has evolved it into the true brilliance that the name defines. The flames of Shounetsuton is the true fires of creation, that puts the Uchiha’s use of the name to shame. It emerges the same flash of flame on target’s sight but burns with a stronger purity. It also is said, when confronted with its ‘adversary’ jutsu, it grows even stronger in retaliation. > + Chakra & Stamina Cost: 500 & 350 + Type: Offense + Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 0 + S + Effects: Damage = Target’s Max Stamina + -50 HP per turn. < Be advice wise its not a bad idea but since you are performing the attack why not have its damage equal to your stamina? +Sp. Effect: If used to counter “Amateratsu”, an “Amateratsu” parent jutsu or Blaze Release jutsu, Damage is increased by X1.50 and does direct damage. (Dice roll reflected on enemy's roll for counter action.) +Requirements and Restrictions: Tengan active to use. +Created by: Asura Jiin +AP: 600
4. + - Rocket Uppercut - > > A great forces backs the fist of the fighter as he pushes all his energy into a drive forward. Once at the right angle, he drives his whole body up to deliver a powerful upper-cut that strikes the opponenet's jaw. The blow is so fast and powerful, it is known to launch people clear into the air. + Stamina Cost: 120 + Type: Offensive + Rank: D + Damage + Effect: 180 + Airborne status + Drawback: +1 Stress
5 . + - Yoton: Yoake Rasengan - Dawn Spiraling Sphere - > > A version of the Rasengan transformed by the life-defining properties of Yang Release. The sphere bright light becomes even brighter and almost pure white in appearance. The physically manifested chakra of the famous jutsu is adapted to manifest the physical energy of the caster. The jutsu compresses so much energy, if released, it can be transformed into a massive beam of chakra that can decimate an opponent from far range--viewable from afar similar to a sunrise. + Chakra & Stamina Cost: 460 & 252 + Type: Offensive + Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 0 + A + Damage: Damage = (User's Stamina + HP) + Damage dealt against enemy's original End (negate status boost). +Conditions and Restrictions: To Flow Chakra raise in End does not get negated. +Created by: Asura Jiin AP: 600
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 | Subject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests July 31st 2017, 11:28 | |
| Also don't forget my blue prints please >< |
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 | Subject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests July 31st 2017, 12:25 | |
| With them having a physical element being used on to them I wouldn't allow them to even hit higher than the regular shadow clones, as again its just a shadow of that element when having an element coming into play. So they may get a boost to where not 100% but like another 15% is added onto their attributes using the base effect of the actual shadow clone technique.
Reason for the advice of having it strike your opponent using your max stamina, as youre performing the attack who's to say that an enemy is going to have higher stamina to which you perform this technique and they have something to heal when taking damage or gain something back that is equal to the damage they are getting?
So that could leave you in a hole with you helping them in the end instead of helping yourself. |
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 | Subject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests July 31st 2017, 12:53 | |
| 1, sorry about the message on PM but i digress.
2-- okay so Ill scrap the clone idea and come back to it some other time.
As for the Shin Amateratsu, I understand your point of view. I never thought that would happen when the jutsu is based on an enemy's stats. Anyway Ill use that then. Thanks.
3.< - Shounetsuton : Shin Amateratsu - True Goddess of the Sun > > After studying the powers of Amateratsu of the Uchiha, Asura had adapted the same legendary jutsu into his own power of Inferno Release. Using the flames that could even consume Amateratsu, he has evolved it into the true brilliance that the name defines. The flames of Shounetsuton is the true fires of creation, that puts the Uchiha’s use of the name to shame. It emerges the same flash of flame on target’s sight but burns with a stronger purity. It also is said, when confronted with its ‘adversary’ jutsu, it grows even stronger in retaliation. > + Chakra & Stamina Cost: 500 & 350 + Type: Offense + Hand Seal(s) + Rank: 0 + S + Effects: Damage = Caster's Max Stamina + -50 HP per turn. +Sp. Effect: If used to counter “Amateratsu”, an “Amateratsu” parent jutsu or Blaze Release jutsu, Damage is increased by X1.50 and does direct damage. (Dice roll reflected on enemy's roll for counter action.) +Requirements and Restrictions: Tengan active to use. +Created by: Asura Jiin +AP: 600
Let me know if its all cool now. |
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 | Subject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests August 3rd 2017, 16:32 | |
| Awesome job, I'll be reviewing over the Blueprints tonight for sure as I'm also working on a few other things tonight. |
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 | Subject: Re: Asura Jiin's character approval requests August 6th 2017, 11:00 | |
| Okay, ill await the blueprints please. |
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